incessant black raindrops that flood my soul...

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shes inside me while im inside her

so shes sitting on my bed writing some erotica. naked. i dont know if i should rip the pen and paper from her hands and thrust myself inside her, or let her enjoy this moment. she looks so hot and bothered, her skin is glowing and wet. i can almost see her trembling a little, or maybe i just feel it. maybe its just me. i decide i could use a break anyways, but im not going to throw any clothes on just yet. im a little too exhausted for that much movement anyways. so instead i reassess the situation and fantasize about what just happened. it was just way too hot.

she puts down the notebook just as i decide i cant take it anymore. she looks up at me and blushes, then jumps up at me to kiss me and wrap her arms around my neck. i grab her and i lie with her, staring into her eyes. the heat inside me is cooling off, and in a few minutes ill jump inside her again, anything to be in that place with her. That place she takes me to, its fiery and passionate and hot, just so so hot. the heat feels like its boiling my skin but i never want to leave that place. She wants to go again, but i want just another minutes rest. i grab the notebook she was just writing on and decide to read to start myself off.


"..........just over an hour ago she showed up at my door wearing nothing but a short strapless black dress and some knee-high black boots. her skin was wet and sticky from being outside in the hot humid weather of summer. "i couldnt get a hold of you," she says, "and i just had to have you." her voice was breathless, she must have just got off the bus. being a man my immediate reaction was an erection, and i said nothing. my mind stopped dead and i grabbed her around the waist and pulled her inside. Some intense kissing and touching, i could feel almost every inch of her body. her breath was quick and heavy already, and i found out she really was naked underneath the dress.

i grabbed her up and she wrapped her legs around me, my mouth on her neck. my legs started trembling with desire and i (stumbly) made my way with her into my bedroom. As soon as my legs felt the edge of my bed i collapsed onto it with her. BY this time i had already lifted her dress up to her stomach, and now i pulled it over her head. With one move she was naked except for boots.

i moved my head down to taste her, her thighs were gleaming with sweat. immediately she grabbed fistfuls of my hair and pulled my face next to hers, "no," she said, "i need you now, i want you now, i need it."
i had no choice but to give it to her, how could i resist? being inside her was beyond explanation. she took all of me in, excitedly (in fact, she wouldnt take any less, i had to give it ALL to her). Getting inside so deep of her, i lost control. the only thing i was capable of doing is thrusting again and again. her screams penetrated the air around us, they drilled through my brain and left room for nothing else. i became her, in that instant. the deeper i got inside her, the deeper i got inside myself. i reached this fiery place where i could never have enough. i could feel flames all around us, surrounding my bed. i could feel hot leather sticking to my back, i could feel me bursting through her. i could see inside her soul, and i became an entity of passion and lust. in that moment i could see her as my bride and as my demise simultaneously. i became enveloped into her, she sucked me in. i let loose into her world of screams and fire, where i didnt exist, i was simply the catapult. i never ever wanted to leave that place, id hold myself in as long as i possibly could. i could feel the comming explosion but tried so hard to dismiss it. i tried plunging deeper, deeper, deeper into a place where i could stay forever, where i could forget about exploding for a little while.
all of a sudden i got deeper than i ever had before, i broke inside her, i broke free, i felt as if i had entered her body completly. her screams sounded as if i heard them from inside her, i became completly enveloped into her, i was her screaming, i was in a sea of overwhelming euphoria, i loved her (in that instant) i was free inside her, as i exploded, i collapsed on top of her and her skin became glued to mine.
her legs loosened and the leather from her boots peeled off my skin, it felt like slow-motion.
our breathing combined, her breasts swelled and contracted rapidly, i could feel them sticking to my skin and pressing up against my bare chest. there was still a fire burning in the tiny layer of sweat between our bodies. i looked into her eyes, she tried to manage a smile. she was still breathing heavily, i knew i fucked her speechless, hell, i was speechless. i considered her face, it glowed, it just exploded with beauty. her make-up was turned smokey from all the sweat, she looked like she just got out of a fire. and yeah, we both did..........."



i realize immediately after the first line she's writing about what just happened. i read on and realize she wrote it even more accurately than i could have, from my point of view. this is scary, i think. its like shes inside my head. shes inside me while im inside her. shes in the same place i am when im inside her.
Knowing now how much i please her, i cant ever let her leave. Knowing now she goes to the same state of euphoria as i do, i want it again. to take her there, to be with her in that place.
my erection comes back with a vengence, and i turn to her blushing face immediately and pounce on her. this time i dont get right to it, and i make her orgasm five times before i let her have it again. her moans soon to become screams, i grin up at her while i get up to do it all again.

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